Clouddogさん

Extraordinary dynamics and tension presented by the scenes. Definitely among the best I’ve ever had. Can’t help loving it even though the protagonist is not exactly my type.
However, in my perspective, storytelling can be better. You can sense the basic framework is there but it might need a bit more embellishments to create some depths. Given that for now, the characters’ behaviour and dialogue were too straightforward so it makes the whole story arc and the character arcs quite flat.
Apologies for asking for so much, it’s only because I got this feeling that I can expect more from 時羽兼成先生
いい作品を拝見させて頂いてありがとうございます。先生の今後の作品も楽しみます。